Language and Style

Language

• The poet uses free verse and speaks in a conversational style.
• The lines flow gently and freely into one another as the poet narrates and comments.
• It is easy to follow the poet's narration and understand her advice.

Rhymes

• The poet uses rhymes and this makes the lines flow smoothly and in a sing-song manner.
• It enhances the poet's friendly and warm tone.
  

Personification

• 'those quiet eyes Were breathing desolate sighs" (line 5-6) enhances the effect of the lover's gaze.

Metaphor

• "two pools of lies" (line 3) emphasizes the extent of the lies and evokes an image of drowning which suggests a sense of helplessness.
• "at dice" (line 16) suggests that a love relationship is like a game where you take your chances.